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The following snippet is
from my novella, The Sandman. Alex Steele has been injured in a car
accident and in a coma discovers the dreams she is having of a serial killer are
not what they seem.
I couldn't see
the color of his eyes although I knew that they were a brilliant green, nor
could I see his blue jeans and yet I knew he was wearing Wranglers with a pair
of worn out, scuffed and battered ancient cowboy boots. He wore a red flannel
shirt, left open with a white Hanes wife-beater underneath and his light brown
hair was a little on the long side. He wore Axe body spray, a scent I knew
but didn't recognize and he smelled of Listerine that was barely
concealing the odor of tobacco that you could smell if you got close enough.
I knew all of this,
although I couldn't see him clearly then, and I knew much, much more
by the time I could. I also might have let this all pass me by without another
thought, and in fact, I did somewhat, making it hard to remember and by the
time I realized I really needed to, the weeks had turned into months.
The dream might have
faded away all together into the gray of what was my damaged brain at the time,
disappearing into the oblivion of my memory completely if he hadn't grabbed
the young girl right in front of me on that sunny February afternoon.
Intriguing. The last sentence is a zinger! :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm with Teresa, that last sentence really grabs the Reader's attention. Loved the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteWow! Incredible set-up!
ReplyDeleteThe last sentence certainly got my attention.
ReplyDeleteThis is quite a fascinating snippet. I am intrigued by the premise. I hope you post more next week.
ReplyDeleteThis really pulled me in. I could smell and see everything you described and had a vivid image of him in my head! Great job!
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