Saturday, March 15, 2014

WeWriWa 3/16/14

It's that time of week again...crazy, sexy, and creative snippets from the great authors of WeWriWa!!

Another little snippet from my current WIP...a  supernatural romance tentatively titled "Bid Love's Return"

I dream often of Marblehead, my broken heart trapped inside the endless rerun of my memories. I see the scarred whitewashed brick of the lighthouse tower, the gleaming knotty pine that adorned the inner walls of the little cottage, the continuous roar of the surf crashing against the rocky cliffs as the snow blows fierce in off of the Bay.

Within my sleep I once again lie beneath the downy white quilts of the large bed, the bedroom filled with the scent of the fire burning bright within the fireplace, while somewhere outside,  the faint sound of Captain barking to be let in.

There is the feeling of returning home within my dreams of Marblehead.

            When I find myself with Christian once more.


  1. Wow. And I thought I had a gift for description!

  2. This reader can actually FEEL the yearning in this snippet. Great 8.

  3. Wow...this is powerful. Light as air to read, but it packs a wallop to the heart. Nicely done! :-)

  4. Intriguing and beautifully described. I definitely want to keep reading and find out everything there is to know - great snippet!

  5. It's so hard to live in the past. Very beautiful.

  6. Love evokes a powerful yearning. (One typo I believe...scared to scarred?)

    1. Thank you, Millie! I kept looking at it and I thought something was wrong but my head couldn't seem to see it...This is a WIP so I am grateful for any help I can get!